its a good story i will probably finish it cause i like writing it i just wish i can think of a good beginning and fix all of my spelling mistakes but if you do read this story which i hope you do i would love to here positive feedback and if there is any major errors that just annoy you can you write them and ill fix them right away i love reading and writing im just not very good at it but every comment helps me get better unless you are just being a dick then screw you too well i hope you have as much fun reading it as i had writeing it  :)