Looking for criticism of my Passion Project / an origin Story to the Project / and my writing Project.

Hi, I created a Story which then developed into the origin Story of my passion Project.

After some time, the concepts developed and I thought of a rly cool writing Project, with a bunch of features, while still being held in one overarching Lore of my Passion Project.

Royal Road is the home of this novel. Visit there to read the original and support the author.

Need criticism for almost anything.

Origin Story: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37025/arechnocadia

Writing Project: https://www.arechnocadia.com/project-book

My passion Project: https://www.arechnocadia.com/

Many of these things are already reaching the range of Books, so do expect a bunch of reading, all emotional and deeply thought over.

If anything to it interests you feel free to join, it’s still young so there is right now only me :3

https://www.reddit.com/r/writers/