Eradin Vastille the fourth prince of Andar has transitioned into the life after death.   Informed by the Keeper of Souls that he has lost his stats and skills from his previous life, he is barred from entering Drevas, the city of rebirth.  Instead he is presented with a choice:  Allow his soul to be extinguished or continue his existence in the Barrens, the prison of the gods. NOTE:  I am posting only sections of this fiction to get feedback on my writing.  I'm planning on making massive plot changes and wanted some opinions on my writing before I do so.