Synopsis
With her parents murdered and her brother abducted, a trainee Monk of the Gun pursues the one responsible, the Bull Demon King, undefeated Warlord of the Crimson Army. Struggling to track down her enemy while braving the dangers of the wilds, she enlists the help of Sun Wukong, but 500 years under a mountain have taken its toll. Unstable and weakened, will he be more hindrance than help? Can he become the warrior he once was? A Monk and a Monkey journey across a world...... where the remnants of technology are seen as magic, while pockets of humanity strive to drag themselves out of ignorance.... where the descendants of animal-human hybrids, once created as instruments of war, now seek to dominate the world as demons.... where beings who call themselves Immortals and Gods preoccupy themselves with selfish pastimes, ignoring everything else.
Among other things, a story about growth, grit, and being better than the person you were yesterday.
Here's my rambling on why I'm writing Journey West 5000.
Journey West 5000 is my crazy ambitious writing project to adapt a classic epic called "Journey to the West" for a global, modern audience. It's a sci-fi story disguised as fantasy, and has some road trip + monster of the week elements (as does the original Journey to the West).
No system, definitely no harem, gradual power progression. Hmm, what else can I put here so potential readers know what to expect?
My writing style for now is mostly "show don't tell", because I believe that readers don't need to have everything pointed out to them, and that they should be allowed to make up their own minds about characters based on the actions of those characters. I'm also trying to be less long-winded (a weakness pointed out by some friends) in order to write according to something Neil Gaiman said, which is to write as though I'm the one who has to pay for every word, not the reader. This will bring down my chapter word counts, and might drive away potential readers, but I believe there's value in learning to compress and be concise. All chapters posted here will have been edited.
Constructive criticism, comments, and feedback would be very much welcome and appreciated. Please, please help point out any typos or grammatical mistakes, I'm striving to minimize those as much as possible.
Above all, I hope you enjoy my story.
Table of Contents
- 1Chapter 1 - The Destination2024-11-13
- 2Chapter 2 - The Dark Facility2024-11-13
- 3Chapter 3 - The Reason2024-11-13
- 4Chapter 4 - How Easy Is Banana Pie?2024-11-13
- 5Chapter 5 - Surfacing2024-11-13
- 6Chapter 6 - Tripping the Metal Fantastic2024-11-13
- 7Chapter 7 - Self-invitation to a Massage Party2024-11-13
- 8Chapter 8 - Night Fury2024-11-13
- 9Chapter 9 - It's Bigger On The Inside2024-11-13
- 10Chapter 10 - Are Tigers Yummy?2024-11-13
- 11Chapter 11 - Family Planning for White Dragon2024-11-13
- 12Chapter 12 - Mine Is Bigger Than Yours!2024-11-13
- 13Chapter 13 - What A Good Follower!2024-11-13
- 14Chapter 14 - Preparations for Making Meat Paste2024-11-13
- 15Chapter 15 - Of Barbeques and Firing Squads2024-11-13
- 16Chapter 16 - Too Hot to Handle2024-11-13
- 17Chapter 17 - To Protect and Serve2024-11-13
- 18Chapter 18 - Armed Negotiations and Guerilla Warfare2024-11-13
- 19Chapter 19 - Dances With Imps2024-11-13
- 20Chapter 20 - He Who Rides Clouds2024-11-13
- 21Chapter 21 - Great Sage Equaling Heaven2024-11-13
- 22Chapter 22 - Warm-up or Workout?2024-11-13
- 23Chapter 23 - Reflect Inwards, Grow Outwards2024-11-13
- 24Chapter 24 - Fear Not He Who Practices 10,000 Kicks Once2024-11-13
- 25Chapter 25 - Maiden-Defiling Demon of Gao Village2024-11-13
- 26Chapter 26 - Dangerous Eagle, Cheerful Plum2024-11-13
- 27Chapter 27 - One Big Happy Family2024-11-13
- 28Chapter 28 - Mother's Mourning a Maiden2024-11-13
- 29Chapter 29 - A Young Master’s Employees2024-11-13
- 30Chapter 30 - Revelation Through Conversation2024-11-13
- 31Chapter 31 - Triptika Tang, Ace Attorney?2024-11-13
- 32Chapter 32 - You Want The Truth?2024-11-13
- 33Chapter 33 - You Can’t Handle The Truth!2024-11-13
- 34Chapter 34 - The Not-So-Little Ram That Could2024-11-13
- 35Chapter 35 - Let Your Actions Speak2024-11-13
- 36Chapter 36 - Battle Pigs, Attack Sheep2024-11-13
- 37Chapter 37 - Metaphorical Mountain2024-11-13
- 38Chapter 38 - To Lure, Show Inferiority2024-11-13
- 39Chapter 39 - To Trap, Encourage Arrogance2024-11-13
- 40Chapter 40 - Preparation Prevents Piss Poor Performance2024-11-13
- 41Chapter 41 - Just Bear With It2024-11-13
- 42Chapter 42 - Cry Havoc!2024-11-13
- 43Chapter 43 - Let Loose The Wukong Of War2024-11-13
- 44Chapter 44 - Stick and Move2024-11-13
- 45Chapter 45 - Combatus Interruptus2024-11-13
- 46Chapter 46 - Protective Panther, Buddy Bear2024-11-13
- 47Chapter 47 - Illusion vs Delusion2024-11-13
- 48Chapter 48 - Spreading the Light2024-11-13
- 49Chapter 49 - Choose To Be My Best Self2024-11-13
- 50Chapter 50 - Revelations and Reflections2024-11-13