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Stubbing/Preorder Notice for Golemancer

Stubbing/Preorder Notice for Golemancer

To everyone that read and enjoyed Golemancer, thank you. For everyone that gave (at times) harsh feedback, thank you as well. Basically, if you got to the end of the story I appreciate it regardless. I took a month and did a long rewrite, and while it won't make everyone happy, I think it solves a lot of the most frequent complaints.

This story will be stubbed in a week and a half, so if you have a friend that you wanted to recommend it to, they are running out of time!

As to the changes, I should note that if anyone opts to reread it, it is still lately the same story. The heroes still thwart the titular character at every turn, and events largely play out as they did in the story, but things are tighter/more developed now.

Some of the changes include (minor spoilers).

A longer intro that starts from the AI's perspective.

This book was originally published on Royal Road. Check it out there for the real experience.

Several additional chapters in the green core section to give the Golemancer more wins.

More time and character development of the heroes in different stages of their journey (mostly red core)

And a slightly different ending that skews a bit more toward the Golemancer.

On the whole though, it's the same book you enjoyed (or didn't) but more polished and refined... and 15% longer. Interestingly, I did remove about a hundred thoughs, as well as a almost 130 began to/started to's. Those are easily my biggest offenders in prose. I found some random pronoun mistakes throughout, and I managed to screw up Jax (Jaxx), Llannia (Llania) and Adelphia (I don't even remember) 's names, but Not Alvamer's or Agithus's. I wonder why. I also included a world map. That was fun to make. I look forward to fleshing it out more in future volumes.

Please consider making a preorder and helping to support me on Amazon, but don't worry this feed is going to become advertising spam, even if you don't. The stub notice needed to be put up, but I won't post another chapter to this story until I am ready to announce its sequel. Have a nice day!

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