Hello, everyone, the author here.  Although this is my first time writing a story, the grammar in my story should not be too horendous since I speak English; however, if you do see a grammar mistake I would be glad if you would point it out in the comments.  Other criticism of the story is also welcome.  Finally, this is a story I am writing as a hobby so updates will probably will be random; however, I plan to write a chapter once a week if I can. I am planning for this to be a fantasy story that has as its themes for now - Fate and the Past.