Fates Hands novel is definitely there and has great potential. I will agree with others that there were many spelling mistakes, which could easily be fixed before final publication. My biggest issue with it was the jumping being point of views. I love that there are different points of views from multiple characters, but the lack of clarity when the point of view changes was hard to keep up with sometimes. --- Intriguing plot outline with some potential but the characters are under-developed. The female protagonist is severely underwhelming and lacks emotional depth and maturity. The grammar throughout needs improvement - a lack of speech marks or incorrect use of speech marks throughout the entire novel. -- A really good story, starts out fast passes with lots of characters and story lines that all make sense. There is some rough story lines but the other characters stand up against it and it all turns out well. The latter half of the book is a bit drawn out but it’s well written and a really good story   --- Really enjoyed Fates Hands book just a shame you can’t find it on other platform where you don’t have to buy chapter ! Would read the next to but the cost would be more than buying a book. --- Wow this was one fabulous book I fell in love with the characters and the Love , Friendship that they have between all the different areas. Definitely cant wait to read the next one Highly recommend !!!