As the night passed slowly in this dark country you would find danger at every turn. However, in this particular alley, it had a special sort of silence radiating from it.  Almost as though the sound was being sucked away.  *BANG* Only now does the unraveling time reach the end of its trail. This person which time will soon forget doesn't stop with a gasp nor does the life drain from her eyes like any other person ended by a gun. This woman was ripped from her flesh and sent along the soul stream early.    Hello, again RoyalRoad! I'm alive-ish and I am currently working on redoing my first novel. I am sort of out of sorts right now but if you have any suggestions go right ahead and voice them. I'm not one to shy away from free tips. :D