Synopsis
This fiction is going to undergo severe Editing and a Rewrite over next few months. Here is what it hopes to accomplish:
1) Fix the glaring issues from Style in every chapter 1-31 (Dialogues, POV switches and Head-hopping too much)
2) Add some new chapters in and justify the development between Sofia and Anita
3) Remove the info dumps and make it more organic
4) Finalize the genres that this fiction belongs to
5) Create warning in the synopsis relating to the contents of the fiction.
6) Overhaul and show what Mira's view on Alviona is (slowly)
7) Introduce new characters
8) Show chapters the way they were intended, as clues apparently were not visible at all!
9) Make Alviona a bit more serious.
10) Make me (Author) enjoy reading my own work more (yes! :))
Hi. I have been gone for quite a long while. With heart surgery and such that has happened two months ago, I had not had a chance to log on RR due to being hospitalized. I had some other issues that the admins were kind enough to deal with on this fiction. It's good to see everything in one piece.
The synopsis has been removed. Chapter 1 should be coming out sometimes before christmas. A lot has changed. I hope for the better. Instead of edits, I have re-read every single chapter and found it to be unsatisfying. A lot did not make sense and unless you have previously speculated what Alviona is, many things she does won't fall into pieces. Well then, time to address all of this.
Ladies and gentlelmen, this fiction is undergoing a full scale re-write. While the characters and developments stay the same, it's being done differently. So much that the world should feel darker as it should have been.
For those who have stuck around and know the story: Awesome. I worked hard on this, and hope that you will like my re-write.
For thos that are new: Welcome. Give me some time, as I am super sluggish. I don't know much time is some time, but I gurantee chapter 1 will be up before Christmas.
This said, again, thank you and know that I am back. And that this fiction will be completed. AT ANY COST. I will update synopsis after I post chapter 1.
I might post Alviona (revised, as this current one is far too.... simplified, watered down, and dissapointing version of it) seperately. Those that want this, here. But I don't want to add chapter 40. It won't make sense without the backup and world-building of re-write. It will piss myself off.
Now then, let's write hm?
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Table of Contents
- 1Chapter 0 - Prologue; When old dies, something new is always born2024-11-13
- 2Chapter 1 - A pure-blood named Alviona2024-11-13
- 3Chapter 2 - Complications2024-11-13
- 4Chapter 3 - Haven denied2024-11-13
- 5Chapter 4 - A well-deserved rest2024-11-13
- 6Chapter 5 - An unusual meeting2024-11-13
- 7Chapter 6 - A condition for haven2024-11-13
- 8Chapter 7 - Not an ordinary child, part 1. Sheltered - at last2024-11-13
- 9Chapter 8 - Not an ordinary child, part 2 - Let's go out a bit2024-11-13
- 10Chapter 9 - Not an ordinary child; part 3 - Let's play with water2024-11-13
- 11Chapter 10 - Solomon's death2024-11-13
- 12Chapter 11 - Out of sync2024-11-13
- 13Chapter 12 - Awakening2024-11-13
- 14Chapter 13 - <Subjugation>2024-11-13
- 15Chapter 14 - Rise of the Cursed Man2024-11-13
- 16Chapter 15 - Let me protect you2024-11-13
- 17Chapter 16 - It takes time to sink in2024-11-13
- 18Chapter 17 - Mira's awakening2024-11-13
- 19Chapter 18 - Solution2024-11-13
- 20Chapter 19 - A talk between two mothers, and Alviona's departure2024-11-13
- 21Chapter 20 - Arrival to mainland and declaration of pursuit in magic2024-11-13
- 22Chapter 21 - Criminal2024-11-13
- 23Chapter 22 - An interesting turn of events2024-11-13
- 24Chapter 23 - It’s just business2024-11-13
- 25Chapter 24 -Death and Ascension2024-11-13
- 26Chapter 25 - Gearing up and setting out for adventure2024-11-13
- 27Chapter 26 - What is your limit?2024-11-13
- 28Mistake and an update2024-11-13
- 29Chapter 27 - Mana is a form of energy2024-11-13
- 30Chapter 28 - Have some problems with a magical dungeon? No worries! Let a newbie join you2024-11-13
- 31Chapter 29 - Alviona teams up with Ironmight2024-11-13
- 32Chapter 30 - Raiding the dungeon?! Next time, be sure to be polite and knock!2024-11-13
- 33Chapter 31 - Raiding Tratmul, learning of Stats, and obtaining Shinies!2024-11-13
- 34Chapter 32 - A dwarf with an ambition to pursue magic!2024-11-13
- 35Chapter 33 - The cost of Power2024-11-13
- 36Chapter 34 - Enrollment2024-11-13
- 37Interlude - Zar'Hakal2024-11-13
- 38Chapter 35 - A Meeting between Alvionas and the Core2024-11-13
- 39Chapter 36 - You, me, and duel!2024-11-13
- 40Chapter 37 - Alviona's trickery2024-11-13
- 41Chapter 38 - Alviona's first day of school turned out to be queer2024-11-13
- 42Chapter 39 - Emotions Stirred2024-11-13
- 43Not a chapter, but a Q&A. Everyone is welcome!2024-11-13