Hi my name is Ricardo Smith an aspiring writer  I currently have this story almost complete but would like the community's opinions on it to see if I should post more this is a overpowered battle series about a young adult looking to find his place and deeper strength to achieve immortality in this chaotic world. Follow our main protagonist on this journey as he transforms from a living life in the moment individual to someone who has a deeper purpose. please feel free to drop a comment and tell me what you think